Essay2 (before correcting)

My treasure is the wallet. The wallet is emerald green, oblong, made of leather. It is very easy to use and I’m using it for about 3 years. I still like it very much. The reason why the wallet is my treasure is it’s the last present from my grand mother. She passed away 3 years ago because of the cancer of pancreas. I really liked her.
One summer day when I was a high school student, she asked me “Do you have something what you want?” She lived alone before her cancer was discovered, but she stayed at my family a few months before she died. “Well, I want to buy a new wallet” I answered. ”Then, she gave me some money and said “You may buy a new wallet using this money. I want to go out with you, but I can’t.” I was sad to hear that, but I thought I have to buy a new one to make ease her.
I went to Tsuruya on the weekend and bought the wallet of Annasui. The design is simple and color is beautiful, so I thought she also like it. When she looked it, she admired the beautiful green. I was glad that she liked my choice.
After a few months later, she got worst. She had lived longer than her remaining days that the doctor told, but she died six months later the informing. She also wanted to buy a new yukata for me, but the wish didn’t come true. So I think I have to more cherish the last present. I’m going to keep use the wallet the moment it was broken. (274/6823)