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2010年1月5日火曜日

Writing Essay ② My Favorite Country is Russia!!

My favorite country is Russia! I think it is very attractive country. In fact, I didn’t know anything about Russia until I took Russian class as the second language that we have to choose when we enter this university. I didn’t expect the class, but after a few classes I had interested in the country. Then I’ll tell you the fascination of Russia.
First, I’ll tell you a grounding in Russia. As you know, the capital is Moscow and the area of this country is the biggest in the world. The area is 17,100,000 superficial kilometers! It’s forty-eight times as large as Japan, but the density of population is eight persons per one superficial kilometer. The number is a forty-two compared with Japan. The population is about 142,000,000 and more than 100 kinds of nations live there. The time difference between Japan and Russia is seven hours but between the end of East and West, time is different about ten hours even within the country.
Next, I'll introduce about sightseeing. There are a lot of beautiful and valuable places to visit in Russia. I recommend you to visit Kremlin and Red Square, Moscow. The square is important place for Russian. In1493, the then lard IvanⅢ mede people to maintain front of his castle and mede the square. It's present Kremlin and Red Square. From the square,
you can see beautiful shrine called Saint Basil's Cathedral. It's colorful and I think it is very interesting to see. In addition, there are remain of Lenin. He is a great plitican for the Soviet Union. If you sidit him, it will be very presious experience for you. I also recommend you to visit Herumitage Museum in Sankt-Peterburg. It's a national museum which built by Ekaterina Ⅱ in 1764. She made for her own and collected many trasures but we can see them now. Both of them what I introduced are World Heritage Site so please visit them if you have a chance to go to Russia.
Finally, I'll tell you about food in Russia. Russian dishes are not so famous in Japan, but there are many good dishes in the country. One of them is borshch. When you were Junior high school, it served for school lunch but it's not real borshch! That was just tomato soup. To cook borshch, people use beet and many kinds of meet and vegetables. Before eating it, Russian put sour into borshch. I've ever eaten it because it is difficult to eat it in Japan, but it looks delicious. I also recommend you to eat piroshki. It is sold a lot in Japan, but it's also counterfeit. It made for Japanese and it's just Chinese manju. In Japan, many piroshki are fried but most of them are always baked in Russia. I like Japanese piroshki but I really want to eat real piroshki in Russia.
As you can see, Russia is very interesting country to visit. In addition, it is next door to us. I hope that you became interested in the country. (501/10,040)

2009年11月20日金曜日

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Handsome☆suit
 1. The main actors are Shosuke Tanihara, Takeo Tsukaji and Keiko Kitagawa.
2. Takuro Oki is a hero and he hates his ugly and fat looks.
3. He gets a handsome☆suit and he gets good looks.
4. He flourishes as a super model nameed An-nin Hikariyama.
5. He was turn down by Hiroko who is a new beautiful part timer even though he became a handsome.
6. This movie make us think which is important looks or heart. 
(75/7394)

2009年11月10日火曜日

Movie review (after correcting 2)

Writing Ⅳ Movie Review Handsome☆suit


My favorite movie is Handsome☆suit. I’ll write a movie review about the movie. First I’ll introduce the main cast. Syosuke Tanihara played the role of An-nin Hikariyama. He was born in Kanagawa on July 8 in 1972. He debuted as an actor on the movie Hanayori dango in 1995. Hand☆some suit was the first movie in which he played the lead. Tsukaji Takeo played the role Takuro Oki. He is a comedian and he was born in Osaka on November 25 in 1971. He is also around as an actor in these days and he often appears some movies and TV dramas. Keiko Kitagawa played the role Hiroko Hoshino. She was born on August 22 in 1986. She was a model at first but she became popular as an actress now.

Next I’ll introduce the summary of this story. The hero of this story is Takiro Oki. He is kind and very good at cooking but he has ever associated with any woman because he is ugly and fat. He hates his looks but he has many good friends working at a restaurant named “kokoroya” which is his dead mother left for him and he is spending happy days with them. One day a new part time worker joined in kokoroya Her name is Hiroko Hoshino and she is very beautiful. Takuro felt in love with her at first and he told that to her, but he was turned down by Hiroko flatly. He thought that the reason why Hiroko rejected him is ill-favored face and fat body.

A few days later, he went to a men’s wear shop to buy a suit to wear in his friend’s wedding. In the shop, he recommended to buy “handsome suit” by the boss Shiraki. He says that anyone can handsome just wearing the suit. Takuro didn't believe that at all but tried to wear it, he became perfect handsome man! Shiraki named the handsome man An-nin Hikariyama giving the meaning that “brighten like blaze, be majestic like mountain, sweet and gentle like an-nin doufu”. Since then, Takuro gets to wear handsome suit except when he is in kokoroya. An-nin Hikariyama has spotless looks so all the women passing him always excite looking him and finally he is spotted and recruited as a model. He became famous soon and he got status and fame and happiness as a handsome man. Then he tried to get Hiroko again keep hiding his identity, but for some reason she refused him. He was thinking when he is An-nin, he has nothing can’t do. He couldn't understand why he was turned down again…

This movie is certainly comedy but I think it make people to think what is the most important thing about people’s looks and heart. In my opinion, real ugly person is who has the narrow heart, not look is bad. If there is a man whose face is beautiful and height is tall, probably we call him handsome. Then if the man is mean and narrow, can we say he is handsome? Perhaps some people say YES, but I don’t want to call him handsome. Watching this movie, I thought to be careful about looks is important, but there is more important thing to live “beautiful”. (544/6579)

2009年10月20日火曜日

Movie review (after correcting)

Writing Ⅳ Movie Review Handsome☆suit

My favorite movie is Handsome☆suit. I’ll write a movie review about the movie. First I’ll introduce the main cast. Syosuke Tanihara; played the role of An-nin Hikariyama was born in Kanagawa on July 8 in 1972. He debuted as an actor on the movie hanayori dango in 1995. Hand☆some suit was the first movie that he played the lead. Tsukaji Takeo,played the role Takuro Oki is a comedian and he was born in Osaka on November 25 in 1971. He is also around as an actor in these days and he often appears some movies and TV dramas. Keiko Kitagawa played the role Hiroko Hoshino was born on August 22 in 1986. She was a model at first but she became popular as an actress now.
Next I’ll introduce the summary of the story. The hero of this story is Takiro Oki. He is kind and very good at cooking but he has ever associated with any woman because he is ugly and fat. He hates his looks but he has many good friends working at a restaurant named “kokoroyawhish is his dead mother left for him and he is spending happy days with them. One day a new part time worker joined in kokoroya Her name is Hiroko Hoshino and she is very beautiful. Takuro felt in love with her at first and he told that to her, but he was turned down by Hiroko flatly. He thought that the reason why Hiroko rejected him is ill-favored face and fat body.
A few days later, he went to a men’s wear shop to buy a suit to wear in his friend’s wedding. In the shop, he recommended to buy “handsome suit” by the boss Shiraki. He says that anyone can handsome just wearing the suit. Takuro didn't believe that at all but tried to wear it, he became perfect handsome man! Shiraki named the handsome man An-nin Hikariyama giving the meaning that “brighten like blaze, be majestic like mountain, sweet and gentle like an-nin doufu”. Since then, Takuro gets to wear handsome suit except when he is in kokoroya. An-nin Hikariyama has spotless looks so all the women passing him always excite looking him and finally he is spotted and recruited as a model. He became famous soon and he got status and fame and happiness as a handsome man. Then he tried to get Hiroko again keep hiding his identity, but for some reason she refused him. He was thinking when he is An-nin, he has nothing can’t do. He couldn't understand why he was turned down again…
This movie is certainly comedy but I think it makes to think what is most important thing about people’s looks and heart. In my opinion, real ugly person is who has the narrow heart, not look is bad. If there is a man whose face is beautiful and height is tall, probably we call him handsome. Then if the man is mean and narrow, can we say he is handsome? Perhaps some people say YES, but I don’t want to call him handsome. Watching this movie, I thought to be careful about looks is important, but there is more important thing to live “beautiful”.
(544/4934)

2009年10月13日火曜日

Writing Essay① Movie review

Writing Ⅳ Movie Review Handsomesuit


My favorite movie is Handsome☆suit. I’ll write movie review about the movie. First I’ll introduce the main cast. Syosuke Tanihara:played the role of An-nin Hikariyama was in Kanagawa born on July 8 in 1972. He debuted as an actor on the movie hanayori dango in 1995. Hand☆some suit was the first movie which he was stared in. Tsukaji Takeo,played the role Takuro Oki is a comedian and he was born in Osaka on November 25 in 1971. He is also around as an actor in these days and he often appears some movies and TV dramas. Keiko Kitagawa, played the role was born on August 22 in 1986. She was a model at first but she became popular as an actress now.

Next I’ll introduce the summary of the story. The hero of this story is Takiro Oki. He is kind and very good at cooking but he has ever associated with any woman because he is ugly and fat. He hates his looks but he has many good friends working at a restaurant named “kokoroya” whish is his dead mother left for him and he is spending happy days with them. One day a new part time worker joined in kokoroya Her name is Hiroko Hoshino and she is very beautiful. Takuro felt in love with her at first and he told that to her, but he turned down by Hiroko flatly. He thought that the reason why she turned down him is his ill-favored face and fat body.
A few days later, he went to a men’s wear shop to buy a suit to wear in his friend’s wedding. In the shop, he recommended to buy “handsome suit” by the boss Shiraki. He says that anyone can handsome just wearing the suit. Takuro didn’t believe that at all but tried to wear it, he became perfect handsome man! Shiraki named the handsome man An-nin Hikariyama giving the meaning that “brighten like blaze, be majestic like moutain, sweet and gentle like an-nin doufu”. Since then, Takuro gets to wear handsome suit except he is in kokoroya for example he goes out. An-nin Hikariyama has spotless looks so all the women passing him always excite looking him and finally he is spotted and recruited as a model. He became famous soon and he got status and fame and happiness as a handsome man. Then he tried to get Hiroko again with hiding his identity, but for some reason she refused him. He was thinking when he is An-nin, he has nothing can do. He couldn’t understand why he turned down again…
This movie is certainly comedy but I think it makes to think what is most important thing about people’s looks and heart. In my opinion, real ugly person is who has mean or narrow heart, not who looks is bad. If there is a man who face is beautiful and height is tall, probably we call him handsome. Then if the man is mean and narrow, can we say he is handsome? Perhaps some people say YES, but I don’t want to call him handsome. Watching this movie, I thought be careful about looks is important, but there is more important thing to live “beautiful”. (545/4256)

2009年7月19日日曜日

Essay3 (before correcting)

I’m going to introduce you four good places in Kumamoto.
There is a lake in Kumamoto city called ezuko. I think most of citizens of Kumamoto city are know it. It is near youme town Hamasen. If you want to relax, I recommend you go to ezuko. You can play with water, sitting in shade. There are many children, so you also play with them. There is a small café near the water and you can rest there.
In the night, I recommend you to go to Mt.Kinpo. You can watch very beautiful night view on the top of the mountain. Some people say that the best place to see the night view is Mt.Hanaoka. I like there too, but I think Mt.Kinpo’s is more beautiful because the mountain is higher than Mt.Hanaoka. If you have free time in a night, you should go to Mt.Kinpo.
By the way, do you know “shichifuku manju”? It’s a kind of Japanese manju. It have introduced on TV. There are many tastes such as chocolate, custard cream, ham egg, yogurt and so on. The shape is raccoon dog and delicious cream in it. The shop is in Asoda near the Self-Defense Forces of Kita Kumamoto. It is small shop that you might miss it, but I want you to find it and try delicious manju.
At last, I’ll write about Minamata. The city is famous for the big problem of pollution disease. But, I think the city is good for visit. I recommend you to go to “yunoko” beach. It is good for swimming and you can use a small spa after swimming. After washing your body, you should go to “Fukuda Noujo”near the beach. It is a small shopping town selling jam or wine made by Minamata’s farm products. They are for souvenirs. Minamata city has many good places to visit expect I wrote.
I wrote these four places in Kumamoto, but I want to know much more good places. I want to go around Kumamoto in this summer vacation. (334/7157)

Essay2 (before correcting)

My treasure is the wallet. The wallet is emerald green, oblong, made of leather. It is very easy to use and I’m using it for about 3 years. I still like it very much. The reason why the wallet is my treasure is it’s the last present from my grand mother. She passed away 3 years ago because of the cancer of pancreas. I really liked her.
One summer day when I was a high school student, she asked me “Do you have something what you want?” She lived alone before her cancer was discovered, but she stayed at my family a few months before she died. “Well, I want to buy a new wallet” I answered. ”Then, she gave me some money and said “You may buy a new wallet using this money. I want to go out with you, but I can’t.” I was sad to hear that, but I thought I have to buy a new one to make ease her.
I went to Tsuruya on the weekend and bought the wallet of Annasui. The design is simple and color is beautiful, so I thought she also like it. When she looked it, she admired the beautiful green. I was glad that she liked my choice.
After a few months later, she got worst. She had lived longer than her remaining days that the doctor told, but she died six months later the informing. She also wanted to buy a new yukata for me, but the wish didn’t come true. So I think I have to more cherish the last present. I’m going to keep use the wallet the moment it was broken. (274/6823)

2009年7月10日金曜日

2009年6月12日金曜日

Essay③ About Kumamoto

Im going to introduce you four good places in Kumamoto.

     There is a lake in Kumamoto city called ezuko. I think most of citizens of Kumamoto city are know it. It is near youme town Hamasen. If you want to relax, I recommend you go to ezuko. You can play with water, sitting in shade. There are many children, so you also play with them. There is a small café near the water and you can rest there.

     In the night, I recommend you to go to Mt.Kinpo. You can watch very beautiful night view on the top of the mountain. Some people say that the best place to see the night view is Mt.Hanaoka. I like there too, but I think Mt.Kinpos is more beautiful because the mountain is higher than Mt.Hanaoka. If you have free time in a night, you should go to Mt.Kinpo.

     By the way, do you know shichifuku manju? Its a kind of Japanese manju. It have introduced on TV. There are many tastes such as chocolate, custard cream, ham egg, yogurt and so on. The shape is raccoon dog and delicious cream in it. The shop is in Asoda near the Self-Defense Forces of Kita Kumamoto. It is small shop that you might miss it, but I want you to find it and try delicious manju.

     At last, Ill write about Minamata. The city is famous for the big problem of pollution disease. But, I think the city is good for visit. I recommend you to go toyunoko beach. It is good for swimming and you can use a small spa after swimming. After washing your body, you should go to Fukuda Noujonear the beach. It is a small shopping town selling jam or wine made by Minamatas farm products. They are for souvenirs. Minamata city has many good places to visit expect I wrote.

     I wrote these four places in Kumamoto, but I want to know much more good places. I want to go around Kumamoto in this summer vacation. (357)

2009年5月22日金曜日

My Treasure

My treasure is my wallet.

The wallet is emerald green, oblong, made of leather.

It ia very easy to use and I have used it for about 3 years.

I still like it very much. The reason why the wallet is my treasure is that it’s the last present from my grandmother.

She passed away 3 years ago because of pancreatic cancer.

I really liked her.

One summer day when I was a high school student, she asked me, “Is there something that you want?”

She lived alone before her cancer was  discovered, but she stayed at my family a few months before she died.

“Well, I want to buy a new wallet”, I answered.

Then, she gave me some money and said “You may buy a new wallet using this money. I want to go out with you, but I can’t”

I was sad to hear that, but I thought I has had to buy a new one to please her.

I went to Tsuruya on the weekend and bought an Anna Sui wallet. 

The design is simple an the color is beautiful, so I thought she has also liked it.

When she looked at it, she admired the beautiful green. I was glad that she liked my choice.

A few months later, she got worse .

She had lived longer than the doctor had predicted, but she died 6 months later.

She also wanted to by a new yukata for me, but the wish didn’t come true.

So I think I have to cherish the last present all the more.

I’m going to keep using the wallet until the moment it will be broken. (260)


2009年5月8日金曜日

Essay self introduction

Hello! My name is Misato. First, I’ll introduce about myself. I’m 19 years old and my birthday is May 8th. My blood type is B. I’m from Kumamoto but I have moved 6 times. My hobby is playing the piano. I learned it for 9 years. I practiced a lot of tunes but my favorite one is “A Whole New World”, which is Aladdin’s theme song. I practiced the song when I was 11 years old but I still play it now. I also like playing volleyball. I was on the volleyball team when I was at junior high school and high school . The practice was so hard that I wanted to retire again and again, but I never gave up and I got many precious teammates.

     Unfortunately, I have a few favorites and dislikes about food. Above all, I don’t like eggs! Everyone is surprised to hear that. I like confectioneries that use eggs, but I don’t like scrambled eggs and so on. Everyone says “ it is regrettable for your life!”

     Next, I’ll ask some questions about you.

1. How many people are there in your family?

2. Have you hosted foreign students before? If you say YES, where was he or she from?

3. Why are you hosting a KGU student this time?

4. Please tell me about yourselves! Anything is OK.

     I’m really looking forward to seeing you!

                                          Thank you, Misato   (285)